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Thursday, 21 May 2015

21/5/15 2015 T2: My Mars Information Report!


Our Mysterious Neighbor
Introduction
There is a tiny star that we can see in space that looks kind of red. And that tiny star is actually a planet called Mars. I if you want to know more well then this information report is all to you to read!.

Appearance:
Mars is called the ‘Red planet’ because of its colour. It has old volcanoes and big rocks because they were caused by asteroids and meteoroids. Interestingly, no one has actually seen if Mars is a cold dark planet or a hot bright planet. But to us Mars looks like a hot bright planet.
This is a picture of the dust storms that Mars has.
Could Humans live on Mars?:
Lots of humans think that they could possibly live or stand on Mars, but they can not because Mars has no oxygen but maybe a little bit. Amazingly, Mars has hazards on its own planet. E.G Dust
Storms, Volcanoes erupting, and many more.

Mars’ Orbit:
How long does it take for Mars to revolve on its own axis?, Mars takes 24 hours and 37 minutes. Also Mars is 225,300,000 km away from Earth (Us) so that means Mars is our neighbor which we already know. Now you know how long it takes Mars to turn on its own axis and also how far Mars is from Earth.
This is a picture of Mars’ Orbit and what it looks like.
Mars’ Moon:
Mars has only two moons (Phobos & Deimos). The largest moon between Phobos & Deimos is Phobos. Phobos is a grey lumpy moon & Deimos is a grey and brown lumpy moon. As you can see, Mars’ moons are pretty similar in weird ways.
This is a picture of what Phobos & Deimos (Mars’ Moon) looks like
Conclusion:
I hope this information report tought you lots of cool information about Mars!. If you want to find out more about Mars here is a link:



My Information Report Success Criteria:
Self
Peer
My heading:


  • is an interesting title (I might have phrased the title as a question.)
Yes
My opening paragraph:


  • says what my report is about in a clear way
Yes
  • gives a general “classification” – and maybe a technical classification
Yes
  • outlines the main features of the subject
No
No
My main paragraphs:


  • have sub-headings where helpful
Yes
  • have clear topic sentences  (topic and main point)
Yes
  • are organised so that each paragraph is about a different aspect of the subject
Yes
  • give detailed information (factual descriptions)
Yes
  • include specific, technical vocabulary
Yes
  • are generally balanced (have a similar amount of detail about the different aspects I write about)
No
No
  • may have helpful: tables, pictures and/or diagrams to add information
Yes
My end paragraph:


  • draws the report together/sums up my main points
Yes
  • may give a personal opinion; ask the reader a question and/or tell the reader where further information may be found
Yes

1 comment:

  1. Mālō e lelei Nisha,
    Thank you for sharing your learning about Mars!
    In terms of your Writing, your next steps are:

    1) Develop your vocabulary - use higher level descriptive language AND more TECHNICAL vocabulary
    2) Adding enough factual detail

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